More contrast!
Hm hm, hm. I'm leaving out personal bias, so I'm reviewing the quality. At least I try. I like the synth-sounds that you used in this song. For example the bended sound (e.g. at 0:28) is very very cool. Actually it reminds me of one of my songs, but nevermind. Another cool melody was played by the tinkling (s?). What I found not that well made was the quality of your voice, because it just sounded like from a megaphone. Yes, you did it on purpose, but I think it should have been a contrast to the guitar. However, after all a nice song.